Pretty cool piece. The left girl's right arm looks a bit too long in comparison to the other tho. (or is it an illusion? hm)
Her right arm looks abnormally long. Or perhaps the hand is too small. Either way it looks slightly off imo.
You've always been my favorite artist, its nice to see activity from you on DA! gah, i too wish you were able to continue souless manga. I have all 3 volumes.
Are you not doing the fourth one? >.< Your adaptation is the best version of this story!!
I wish you could have illustrated the 4th book